Of Naming Fictional Jobs

So I searched for ‘tips on naming fictional jobs’ into google–and spent an inordinate amount of time pursuing eventual dead ends.  I’ve drafted many names for the various jobs, species, and so forth in my book, and many times end up going back to the original name; the less specific name that could easily be confused with it’s native meaning.

But, back to the point. I searched. And searched. But alas the results were on naming characters. Or name generators. Or fantasy jobs, as in jobs only found within books, but not jobs that required one to invent a name for it.


An overreaction on my part.

Rowling picked the name auror. This name, as far as I can tell checking through Notre Dame’s English to Latin dictionary, the root, aur, has lots of readings. I searched the root, the full and the suffix–but nothing about it screamed ‘wizard cop’, so I assume she chose it because maybe she liked the sound of it and maybe the meaning to overlay with gold sounded appealing. I don’t know her reasons–but it makes me think that perhaps even if my naming doesn’t have a ‘hard connection’ or any connection, that maybe it’s still okay.

The point being that while my knowledge in Latin is incredibly limited–it seems as though she had fun and that auror doesn’t directly relate to the occupation’s purpose.

I have within my own book several instances where an invented term would suit the occupation rather than just pulling from common words.  But whether to invent a new word or to build off of an existing one has left me confused, frustrated, and on the verge of just leaving the common names for these supernatural jobs at peace.

Perhaps there is no concrete way of doing it. But still, I’ll continue searching.


Of Naming Fictional Jobs

Of Changing POV -Jami Gold

Head-hopping is something I do constantly–granted when I do it, it’s done though a scene change–however, I forget to mark it in some way.

For those who do head-hopping and want some advice on changing POV here’s helpful bit:

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Today’s a holiday in the U.S., so I’m dusting off and updating a post from the archives. While you’re here, don’t forget to comment on my Blogiversary post for a chance to win “me.” Want me to beta read for you or pick my brain about a writing or story problem? Now’s your chance! *grin*

The old version of this post recently came up in one of my writing loops because many beginning writers want to share everything they know about their characters and their story. We see this issue in information dumps of backstory or story research. And we also see this issue in the desire to share everything that every character is thinking and feeling.

However, once we gain experience, we realize it’s good for readers to have questions and to figure things out from the subtext. The Emotion Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi is excellent at giving suggestion on how to show emotion, both from the point-of-view (POV) character as well as from a non-POV character. Simply wanting the reader to know the emotions of another character is not a reason to switch POV. *smile*

Once we’ve determined a POV change is really needed—think emotional arcs, plot turning points, or who has the most at risk—we need to know how to do changes in close third person POV properly. I hope you enjoy!

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Of Lore Appendices

So a plan of mine is to include excerpts at the end of the work from various texts within my novels.

Such as a newspaper clipping, so not to bore the reader too deeply–I’ll include the article the character actually read in it’s entirety at the end of the book.

I’ve always found things like this to be a way to realize the fictional world a bit more.

Somethings we see in the world aren’t of interest to us. In a sense, some things like a news article, reference materiel or hypothesis,  although relevant to the plot, may not be an entertaining read. Even still, it exists and creates a more realistic world.

I shall continue with me ponderings.

Of Lore Appendices

Lore Betwixt Chapters

So, I play a lot of video games–by a lot I mean, very few, but I play them to death.

Recently I’ve been quite kept with Skyrim and Fallout–and in both, during loading screens, lore is displayed (Okay, with Skyrim I think it’s mostly thanks to a mod but still).


I have grown quite attached to this idea–and I love excerpts from works within a novel to be put on display for me in such a way that I could skip it just fine, but if I read it, I’d glimpse into that world more deeply.

I’m currently in the process of adding these between chapters. I even added a relative quote by one of the protagonists of my book in the very beginning. It feels like it’s been something my manuscript has been needing.

Thoughts on this? I’m doing it regardless–but I’m quite interested in the different sides.

Lore Betwixt Chapters

First BETA reader, finished my book~!


My beta-reader has finally finished my book! Very exciting time.

Lots of problems/improvements have been made known now. So after a bit of picking up my shattered heart, I’ve begun to amend things. It’s been a week or so, and I’ve already added some scenes, detail,  and altered story-archs.

I still have a ways to go. It’s pretty exciting now that I have external perception. My work can be elevated to a state that is good enough to start getting rejection letters!

To readers: If you are going through this–any tips? What are your experiences with editing after receiving beta-reader comments?



First BETA reader, finished my book~!

I still have a ways to go.

So, last year or so, I finished my first book.

After three different stories. Where after finishing each one of them I said, ‘Why not continue torturing myself?”

Finally, I’ve forged a world that I believe is reflective of my intended vision. It can grow, change, and ultimately be a world. The character possess something more than plot driving minds.

But, I’m not finished. Not really. I still need other people. Perspectives outside my own. As its known, artists are blind to their art. For all I know, the characters are all secretly Mary Sues. What hell.
The novel in question is centered around alchemy, out-of-body experiences,
incorporeal monsters, and ghosts. It too deals with more worldly things such as friendships, romance, and repercussions for delving into the supernatural world. Such as strained friendships, secrets and so forth.

Its been a long time coming.

I’ve written three or so different stories/versions before reaching this one and still it needs more minds for it to truly blossom into something, I feel, is in its most possible crystallized form.
A clairvoyant, Elexander, and his new friend Eustace, explore an old haunted house. The monster of the house is slain by a ghost. As it turns out this ghost belongs to a living person, known only as the Professor. The Professor begins testing Elexander’s paranormal power, and giving him answers to questions that has been bubbling in his head. However, Professor is kidnapped by alchemists that are a part of an organization known as the Order of Nara. Elexander not wanting to lose the best person to help him find out more about the paranormal world, and its contents, rushes after Professor, not knowing what underlying secrets the alchemists of light hold.


I use Word, but will accommodate the medium needed. I’m looking for things like: how is the pacing? Thoughts on the characters, moods, ect. Continuity Errors, Freedom to engage the characters such as asking them questions. Theories as the story develops. Positive and Constructive Criticism is greatly appreciated.
Grammar is of interest(ish), it’s not necessary, and I don’t really encourage it, as I want you to focus on the story/characters. However pervading poor grammar or something isn’t bad to point out.
I’m willing to beta in return if interested.
PM me if interested. Or you can ask questions here and such.

I still have a ways to go.

The Constant Throes of Contemplating Promotionals

So I’ve come a long way writing the Order of Nara. Along the way I’ve been dabbling in constructing promotionals. Mostly illustrations, which I can translate into posters, buttons, keychains, ect. I’ve even theorized producing a pinup book of some of my female and male characters. Probably to be released in Japanese, for threat of being targeted by various American audience members.

It’s taken a long time writing the book, and I’m not done yet. I need to pay various BETA-readers so I can get objective outlooks, and then, after I’ve spent hours and hours of editing based upon their comments, I have to pay a proof-editor. Then, finally, I can seek out an agent.

All that time I’ve devised these illustrations, and I think, if I can do it right, they’ll heighten the book’s appearance. I really do want my books to have enough drawn art along with the written art, that I can decorate my website, posters, and what not with more than merely a cover.


The Constant Throes of Contemplating Promotionals